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Rea de Miranda's avatar

Your words flow with beauty, Rasmus! Lovely!

Rasmus Rosenkrantz's avatar

Thank you kindly, Rea! This was slightly experimental, so I am glad it worked for you!

Daniel V. Gaglio's avatar

That Caravaggio painting at the end. It's like a final punctuation mark for the poem. Excellent pairing

Rasmus Rosenkrantz's avatar

Completely agree, Daniel! I've had the pleasure of seeing a couple of his paintings here in Italy, they are breathtaking. A genius!

Joseph Coleman's avatar

"Catch me,

as I fall

without weight;

Floating gently in the wind."

I liked the flow to this one. Very nice.

Rasmus Rosenkrantz's avatar

Thank you very much, Joseph! I definitely went for an unconventional flow on this one. Glad you liked it:)

Benno's avatar

Very interesting rhythm on this one Rasmus!

Rasmus Rosenkrantz's avatar

Thank you, Benno! It's a rewrite of a poem I wrote a while back. I feel it has a spontaneous sort of flow that I'd like to reexplore:)