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Rea de Miranda's avatar

Oh God, this is beautifully aching, Rasmus. Such torment.

Rasmus Rosenkrantz's avatar

Thank you for the kind words, Rea! I really think Josh's picture did a lot of work for me here. It took me to places I already knew inside of me, extracted the words from within!

Daniel V. Gaglio's avatar

It's got the late autumn vibe. I like it

Rasmus Rosenkrantz's avatar

That was definitely my intention! Glad you liked it, Daniel<4

Josh Datko's avatar

Adrift Atop Atomic

Beneath Buried Burning !

It's like I've been to this place :) Very nice

Rasmus Rosenkrantz's avatar

I am glad you could relate, Josh! The poem is very much a "how I'm feeling right now" kind of atmosphere