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Josh Datko's avatar

To live halfly when awake,

To fall apart completely when asleep.

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That painting pairs well. The painting can convey a feeling, but the poem puts a finger on it. It's a very nice combination.

Rasmus Rosenkrantz's avatar

Thank you very much Josh. Your feedback is always greatly appreciated!

I agree. When I first read the poem next to the painting it just felt like a perfect mix. The desperate, melancholy look of the woman says everything that's in the poem.

Trey Hinkle's avatar

I really love this one. I’d like to commit it to memory

Rasmus Rosenkrantz's avatar

Thank you very much Trey! I am happy to hear that!